the links,leave the link to your music here and let our rawkus fam leave an opinion for you
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this is from the last forum..leave a link to your music and lets let our rawkus fam leave there opinion like we said please no haters ..yall can get lost this is real here on rawkus...honesty..so if its hot say its hot if not let it be known but tell them what you think they can do to improve .....
Your vocals need to be mixed with the track. Unmixed vocals can sound harsh on a beat. I like the content for sure. The sound is good but needs to be filled out by mixing and professional mastering.
Also, your breath control could be better. Your lyricism needs sharp breath control and great enunciation to come off.
i definitly agree to enunciation..that is the key to recording a good to great vocal performance i tell emcees all the time....OPEN YOUR MOUTH AND SPEAK CLEARLY....as clear as you can at least
Im not an mc on either War at Home or Buku Talk, Im not an mc full stop, I just did the scratches and dug the samples for the chorus'.
My beats are on my website. War at Home & Buku Talk were produced by P.A. for Cleverwon Productions.
The track hasnt been professionally mixed or mastered. Thanks for listening and thanks for your comments, I appreciate it.
i like the fact that you sound good doing something a little different than what everyone else is doing do your thing fam ...i def like the one when your talking about taking it back
thanks for the love, im very interested in hearing what other people have to say about my music good or bad. sometimes i feel im in a bubble and i'm getting the same perspectives from the same people. one love.
yo i checked out your joints, im definently feeling the third joint thats on your myspace player. i like the blend of rhyming and the splash of spoken word you mixed with it. all the joints were good, but sometimes i think you may go over the listeners head. i didn't listen from an artist point of view, i listened from a regular mofo point of view, since that's how i think most people will listen. i was doing other shit, like checking email, etc... while i was bumping your music. from my semi listen all i can say negatively is that i wanted some of the stuff to have more musical elements, you know bridges, breakdowns, etc.. but the lyrics were on point, content good, its pretty good music. keep up the good work.
